Farmer brown
dear farmer brown i demand you to get me never ending corats and a masculin amazon with a corate garden and ir you dont you will get a consequence which will be baby bunnies around your house and in in your house so i demand you to give it it to me before 3am hahahahahaha sincerely the white bunny rabbit.
Kia ore, my name is Milla I go to gilberthorpe school I enjoyed the part we you said never ending carots . Did you think about mabey adding a little bit more wrods . How about mabey adding some foll stops?
ReplyDeleteKia ora My name is Azire from Gilberthope school and i loved the way you want baby rabbits. Did you think about adding more reason way you want a baby rabbit.How come you want a baby rabbit?
ReplyDeletekia ora azire i put baby rabitts because i am one and i have my own at home.
DeleteKia Ora,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part how you added the consequence if you dont give carrots by 3am I will put baby bunnies aroud your house. This reminded me of when a teacher came to our class and told us to write about this. Next time you could check your spelling.
ok that was the writing when that techer was teching us about our writting
DeleteKia ora christina,I'm Ethan H from Te Rōpū Manawaroa
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part when you was gonna give farmer brown heaps of bunnies.When I read this post I learnt farmer brown should give the stuff or the consequence will be made.Maybe next time you add some pictures of the story.Buts thats all you need to do so bye!