I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora, Milla here from Gilberthorpe School. I like that you have big words in your writing slide you should do it more often. Maybe you could put some more slides on there about your writing I love to read your slides, storys. From -Milla
Kia ora Christina it's Azire from Gilberthorpe school and this is a really big change from your old writing a lot biger anyway next time you could go back and see what color you have got you text and change it because it's pink is really hard to see on that back round anyway next time the best thing that you could do is change the text to like a darker color so we can see better and maybe make the text little bit smaller so that we can read all of it
But i cant change the colour its for my play because its whos talking the colours mean who is talking like if you put mum and dad dad would be blue and mum would be red you get it now Azire not to be rude tho anyways Thank you for commeting.
HI cristina lacie here great job on this. Did your parents enjoy it? I likeed how you said that you were proud because you only got 1 question wrong i would be very happy if that was me
Hi, it's Hunter from Whakamanawa. It's great to see that you got one wrong. On my spelling test I got at least 5 wrong. Some advice is to tell us what you found hard about your slide. That's all from me, BLOG YOU LATER!!!
Kia ora Christina, Zoey here from Whakamanawa. I love your slide and what you have done on it. I find creative and that you put effort and time into it. Maybe next time you could say a bit more about the slide in your post and do some more writing in the slide. Also next time you could finish off the front slide so that it's got all the information in the boxes. Blog U Later!
Kia Ora Christina, This is a great blog post but I think you might need to write something like a introduction about what you are doing? what was your favourite part of making that slide? What is your favourite subject? Well anyway great job, Bye
Kia ora Christina its me Skyla from Te Ropu Whakamanawa. I really like this blog post because youhave done heaps of work on it well it looks like it. Also I think maybe next time you could on your most proud writing maybe you could do your real writing that you are actually proud of and I know that you are proud of your spelling but still.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora, Milla here from Gilberthorpe School. I like that you have big words in your writing slide you should do it more often. Maybe you could put some more slides on there about your writing I love to read your slides, storys. From -Milla
ReplyDeleteThank you Milla
Deletehi it is Rory! here good job at or writing
ReplyDeletebye :-)
Hello, it is very nice
ReplyDeleteKia ora Christina it's Azire from Gilberthorpe school and this is a really big change from your old writing a lot biger anyway next time you could go back and see what color you have got you text and change it because it's pink is really hard to see on that back round anyway next time the best thing that you could do is change the text to like a darker color so we can see better and maybe make the text little bit smaller so that we can read all of it
ReplyDeleteThanks Azire #AWESOME
DeleteBut i cant change the colour its for my play because its whos talking the colours mean who is talking like if you put mum and dad dad would be blue and mum would be red you get it now Azire not to be rude tho anyways Thank you for commeting.
DeleteHello Christina.
ReplyDeleteyou are a good writer but you need to fell out the 2 thing at the front.
an you are a skilled gril you are fun and friendly.
Hello Christina.
ReplyDeleteit is Elijescha here.
I like your writing, it is good.
one thing you could work at is, fighting every thing in the slid.
from Elijescha
Hi it brodie.i like the way you but you writing on you blog why did you have to do it.
ReplyDeleteHI cristina lacie here great job on this. Did your parents enjoy it? I likeed how you said that you were proud because you only got 1 question wrong i would be very happy if that was me
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Christina!
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post!
Next time you should write a little bit more!
Also YOU KNOCKED MY SOCKS OFF by doing this
BYEEEEE
Kia Ora Christina.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post.
Next time can you exsplan what you have done.
but I like your slide.
byyeee
Hi, it's Hunter from Whakamanawa. It's great to see that you got one wrong. On my spelling test I got at least 5 wrong. Some advice is to tell us what you found hard about your slide. That's all from me, BLOG YOU LATER!!!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Christina, Zoey here from Whakamanawa.
ReplyDeleteI love your slide and what you have done on it. I find creative and that you put effort and time into it. Maybe next time you could say a bit more about the slide in your post and do some more writing in the slide. Also next time you could finish off the front slide so that it's got all the information in the boxes.
Blog U Later!
Kia Ora Christina, This is a great blog post but I think you might need to write something like a introduction about what you are doing? what was your favourite part of making that slide? What is your favourite subject? Well anyway great job, Bye
ReplyDeleteThanks Emalea For commeting
DeleteKia ora Christina its me Skyla from Te Ropu Whakamanawa.
ReplyDeleteI really like this blog post because youhave done heaps of work on it well it looks like it.
Also I think maybe next time you could on your most proud writing maybe you could do your real writing that you are actually proud of and I know that you are proud of your spelling but still.
BLOG YA LATER!!!
:)