I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Christina it is Lacie here. Great job on doing this my class done this as well. Did you think of adding what you had to do because some people may not know what you had to do and may be confused why you put this on your blog.
Kia Ora Christina! I like your work! I can clearly see what is private and what is personal information. Maybe next time you could add some writing to tell others what the pictures mean clearer. Did you think about that? From Mikayla.
Kia ora Christina, Good job on this Private and Personal! Private and Personal are very different and you have done a good job with it. When did you do this? and maybe you could add some writing so your veiwers could know what your doing and why you doing it, ~Courtney.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
like it private and persnal are things that were learning in class
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DeleteKia Ora Christina it is Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteGreat job on doing this my class done this as well.
Did you think of adding what you had to do because some people may not know what you had to do and may be confused why you put this on your blog.
Kia Ora Christina!
ReplyDeleteI like your work! I can clearly see what is private and what is personal information. Maybe next time you could add some writing to tell others what the pictures mean clearer. Did you think about that?
From Mikayla.
Kia ora Christina,
ReplyDeleteGood job on this Private and Personal! Private and Personal are very different and you have done a good job with it. When did you do this? and maybe you could add some writing so your veiwers could know what your doing and why you doing it, ~Courtney.
Kia ora Christina
ReplyDeleteI think you did it perfectly because you have the same as the teacher told us. I have the same answers as you!